How's My Driving?
Complaints? Concerns? Suggestions? Leave them here.



THINGS TO NOTE:
• Comments are screened, anon is enabled, but please don't be afraid to comment in-person. I do not take critcism sourly, so long as it is given in the spirit of improvement.
• Crit will be accounted for in light of current in-game events.
• Past is past; I don't own a time machine.
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• Please note the game you are basing your crit in; this account is used in multiple games.



A LITTLE PREFACE:
@capeandcowl:
Jaime has been pulled just shortly after that little barbeque at the end of Blue Beetle #25. What does this mean?
one: He and his suit are on good terms, but strange effects from the teleporter that brought him into game has tampered some of the Scarab functions (most notably Jaime's ability to jump into the Bleed).
two: He is a member of the Teen Titans.
three: The budding relationship with Traci 13 hasn't been solidified.
four: As of 04/10/09, Jaime has been in-game for six months, and no, he hasn't forgotten about his family. He keeps a journal full of letters home because we all know how family-centric he is. He just doesn't broadcast his roneriness that much, because...
five: Hideous stuff keeps happening to him and his friends, totally putting a damper on the whole fun and sarcasm we all know and love! I'm still working on maintaining a balance, despite Jaime being from a pointedly lighter-toned title compared to the content of the game.

Thank you in advance. :)